2003-08-05 danglemyfeet

my epiphany

Contact: Email, notes, guest book (5/5)
Errors: Your rings link takes me to my own edit rings page, I think you forgot to put your user name in the link. Other than that, you’re golden. (9/10)
Navigation:Navigation is perfect. All of your links are in separate tables, which are all labeled. Beautiful. It makes reviewing a breeze. (10/10)
Updates: Every day with lots of multiples. Extra point! (11/10)
Layout Design: I really like your layout. The navigation’s great and the colors all go together nicely. As always though, I’m going to make some suggestions. The layouts on your older and index pages are slightly different. In my opinion, they should be the same, but I’m quirky. I like how on the older page the image (which I like a lot by the way) is the same size as the text box. I assume you enlarged the text box on your index page to accommodate your entries. However, it would be nice if you enlarged the image. Not too hard to do if you have Photoshop or something of that sort. Also, on your older page the links are organized differently. I really recommend using the same organization as on the index page, it’s so clear. Plus, on the older page the links to your reads are inexistent. Speaking of the reads section, try to shorten up your right column on your index page by not having a space between every two reads, either that or make a drop down menu. I like all of your extras, and I think that maybe you should add the extras found at the bottom of your entry box to the extras section on the right. Just a small suggestion here, I enjoy all of your day things, like link of the week, etc. However, your song of the day seems a little out of place since it is not a link. What if you linked the song of the day to a page containing its lyrics? Try this site to find them. Also, the Amber alert is confusing to me. I’m not sure what your relationship is this girl, or if there is none at all. The scrolling text lines have always bothered me. However I feel in this case it’s alright, if you could change the colors to match your site. Last comment, I love your ‘I am’ section. It’s great. (18/20)
Content: Although your entries tend to be daylog, you are able, unlike many others, to pull it off. You recount your days with humorous story lines, and reading your diary felt like reading a good book. Actually reading your diary also brought out a little nostalgia from when I was thirteen and all I had to worry about was how pale I was and my guy problems. Trust me kid, you’re in for a long ride. Never write just to fill quotas for reviews. Only write when you truly have something so say, or else the entries being reviewed will just be short and pointless space fillers. Overall, good job. (37/40)
Extras: Cast, surveys, reads, imood, counter, and many more (5/5)

Total Points: 95/100 Great Job
Reviewed by: Val

Recommended Reading: This one is amazing.


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